822 Beta

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JillyFoo
29th Jun 2020, 5:40 PM

Next update pre-updated for Friday. Almost to the end of the chapter.

Okay so why are there dumps of human world trash in their world? Sink holes. There are places where the portal appears underground on Earth for several years and becomes labeled as a sinkhole and then people dump their trash in there.

Note to self: thicken the wrap around white in the text.

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RealXove
30th Jun 2020, 3:22 PM

You’re telling me...
Well, then. One man’s trash, right??

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TheGreyPotter
2nd Jul 2020, 6:46 PM

Aw, this dump has so many fond memories

Like being stabbed in the gut and left to die

and devouring knife-mouth-monster

Gotta wonder if earth bacteria can survive here, or meaningfully infect these creatures.

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DocMesa
10th Jul 2020, 11:16 AM

Can I offer a bit of feedback here? The red background does make the text a little difficult to read. Maybe it needs a little adjustment?

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JillyFoo
15th Jul 2020, 2:28 AM

That is good feedback, Docmesa. I will work on fixing that.

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JillyFoo
24th Jul 2020, 4:01 AM

Page adjusted to not burn the eyes so much. Thank you for your feedback.

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coobcakes
11th Aug 2020, 9:07 PM

I like this character arc a lot. It's nice for these two to genuinely be friends. :)

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