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21st Mar 2020, 5:41 PM

Gosh what can I say? So much has happened and we are all in it. Just enjoy this update. This is a transition for Saturno to get his head back in gear. The human him wants her. The creature he is wants to survive.

Also preupdated next update for Friday. Early updated at https://www.patreon.com/jillyfoo

Edit: Think I'm saying "this" too much...

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24th Mar 2020, 6:38 PM

Seems like our hero has a good head on his shoulders makes me think the power growth will keep getting stunted. If he becomes the world creature then what creatures did he want to defend. Does he love the smaller creatures, empathetic, or perhaps making up for consuming others by saving more. Friends who who seek power could create later issues unless those friends accept beings stronger than them. Maybe we need a rival to the hero trying to grow faster than him.

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31st Mar 2020, 8:47 PM

Good insights Sean. Gosh I don't know if I have a "rival" per say. You know how often a zombie story often ends up not about the zombies? I think the plot of DE is a bit more about other things than does Saturno end up on top. Hey you know sometimes a story might be more interesting if it doesn't go exactly the way you expect. I swear it's GOOD you'll see.

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