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JillyFoo
7th Jan 2017, 2:49 PM

Originally had a freak out Saturno reaction panel, but after a couple hours of struggling to layout panels in photoshop... I thought does it need a goofy reaction panel?

Wish I did more with the first panel. Didn't know it was going to be the real reaction panel.

The entire page process has been super challenging lately. So much anatomy stuff I have to get just right.

It's been bumming me out that I am having such a hard time getting through this scene. I feel like I can't promote DE at all cause of nudey Alpha making everything rated adult. There is reasons for this that move the story along I just can't talk about it or else I spoil what happens.

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After sleeping on it, I changed my mind. GO BACK ONE PAGE.

RE Shosher “Well, cannibalism could also be an adult-rated theme. This is a mature story, no babies allowed. :D”
I was thinking more on the knowledge that the latest page is what people see first. I think these recent scenes would turn away most adult readers.

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Shosher
8th Jan 2017, 1:19 AM

Now we got a cool transition into the first panel. :D
You can always try letting your audience see the first page first. But then again, they would have to read through the whooole comic. Which isn't bad, I wouldn't mind reading from the beginning.

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EEN
10th Jan 2017, 3:58 AM

I do not think mature themes here are really out of bounds of the main stream these days. I stopped watching game of thrones because of its "mature" content but I am still reading. I think DE handels its subject matter very well and is never there in poor taste or gratuitous. I wish more media knew how to handle extreme content without going overboard or fetishizing it. DE always proves worth of taking a step towards into uncomfortable territory.

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