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4th Sep 2015, 12:00 AM

I thought about ending the chapter here but I think I'll end it elsewhere.

Oh and the whole "why is he being an idiot" thing... Remember your past and think like a teenager! (Gosh I think he was a bit smarter when he just joined. Little scared of everything Grey birdie.)
Besides it would be boring if he runs away permanently and it would leave so many loose ends. Oh no no!

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4th Sep 2015, 6:12 AM

He just got trounced by Alpha...his mentoring has made him forget the rules: cowards are survivors.

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4th Sep 2015, 9:55 PM

Of I never doubted why he makes retrospectly bad teenage choices. It is excellent writing that he does instead of acting like a mini-35 year old.

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