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JillyFoo
18th Oct 2018, 1:54 AM

Update a go! This could have easily been three pages. Lots of panels. Because I had that page where it shows Alpha surviving the land's fire put out, I did not think it was necessary to embellish the emotion on the page. Saturno is surprised. Moving on. One more page til end of chapter and... it's pre-updated for FRIDAY!

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MK_Wizard
18th Oct 2018, 2:04 AM

I wonder how this will end now.

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DocMesa
18th Oct 2018, 6:40 AM

Slight typo in last panel - should be "She's" or "She is".

Also got an answer to my question from last time. :3

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JillyFoo
18th Oct 2018, 11:33 AM

Hate it when that happens. I’ll have to fix the typo after work today. I was considering enlarging the page anyway because the dialogue of Alpha is too small to read.

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