And then Saturno was forever changed...(those last 2 panels are drawn soo bad. lol)
I think this is the most sexually explicit DE gets for a while. Other than kissing and embracing scenes, this was the first real "fooling around" comic scene I have drawn. I felt the scene was necessary because I wanted to show them getting to 2nd base but not home. It's not like I'm being a prune(editing this comment for the third time I wonder) I think it's just that as a writer I see the whole story and where this goes for better and for worse. And there really is some good things too. I can't say what I really think or else I'll spoil the story badly. I think if people are curious I'll rant about this at the end of the chapter.
Depending on the reaction, I may cut this page in the print. I've already decided to skip this page at the Smackjeeves mirror due to their new policy.
I've been wondering that for a few pages as well. If he was a girl would he still of been paired up with Alpha, or maybe with Vinny? The second option (being paired up with Vinny) would not have been as nearly as significant as the current pairing imo.
I feel like he's always been focused on Alpha, even before his gender was decided. Always entranced by her strange form, always nagged by her strength and power. I doubt that attraction would have changed if Saturno chose to be female. And as for the current... scenario. Ladies can still titillate and 'fool around' with the ladies ;D
Oho trust me, as a lady-type who much prefers to 'fool around' with other lady-types I'd be all for that development. The reason I question it is because back when Saturno was choosing sexual characteristics the theme of reproduction was brought up, and I'm sure was always meant to be explored with Saturno (it was also one of his anxieties about choosing a body type). It will be interesting to see if/how reproduction outside of the main entity that all the demons reside on will play out.
long time lurker here--because I also have a mirror on SmackJeeves and this content is tame in comparison to some of the stuff I put in my comic...what's this policy you speak of? I scoured the news posts and I couldn't find anything. D:
Nice to hear from you. :)
I think SJ is trying to shake off the yaoi rep.
http://www.smackjeeves.com/tos.php in "content guidelines" I found this out by checking an old yaoi comic I used to read on SJ and found out the creator completely censored it due to the new policy.
I am assuming someone helped him become fully functional given he didn't even know how to make himself ears or was this more due to human hormones I wonder? I was half expecting an an awkward scene where Saturno wasn't up to the task at hand. Then again I have called everything wrong about this scenario, clearly I was not as ready for Saturno's journey into sexual maturity as Alpha was.
Indeed! Quite surpsising to see demons act out human sexuality to this degree. The hints in the story so far rather suggested that they (or most of them, anyway) don't really understand the way humans think and act, let alone why.