673 Dominant Traits

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JillyFoo
26th Jun 2015, 12:00 AM

Like... reading... a slow updating...page...train wreck...

Anywho...Can you help out my friend XiyakaHex?
XiyakaHex is posting her comic here in hopes of getting helpful feedback. She is majoring in video game design and she has designed many creatures in the current chapters of my comic Demon Eater (For example the armored raptors last chapter). She is an exceptionally talented monster designer.

Please help her improve as an artist by giving constructive criticism on her art.

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60sRefugee
26th Jun 2015, 12:34 AM

Poor, poor deluded Saturno...

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Shosher
26th Jun 2015, 2:37 AM

:o
Ooooooh Saturno, didju just shove Alpha out of the way?

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Zulu Tango
26th Jun 2015, 3:19 AM

I like his expressions on this page!

I think I'm gonna like his expressions on the next page even more!

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DocMesa
26th Jun 2015, 7:28 AM

Okay, you can rip him to pieces now, Alpha.

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Katzen_Irastra
26th Jun 2015, 3:21 PM

...ok... now i want to see how saturno will survive after all the things that he did.

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Dodom
26th Jun 2015, 6:02 PM

Maybe he can run very fast?

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EEN
28th Jun 2015, 2:15 AM

One must wonder if his flippant attitude is ignorance or if he just think he has nothing to fear from Alpha any longer now that he ate the equivalent of a kaiju in bio-mass.

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DocMesa
28th Jun 2015, 7:20 AM

I imagine by the time Alpha's done, there's going to be Fifty Smears of Grey all over the walls. :p

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Groot, I am
1st Jul 2015, 4:00 PM

Pardon me captain, but your standing in the middle of the p way. I need, no want, you to move. K? ~ last words of a sailor.

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wth lol

seanmcchapman
23rd Apr 2016, 9:34 PM

HEY WTF! lol WHats he even doing she's tere for a reason and he just like na there's no reason to be here and talk I mean food is below?...right? lol XD

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